U7 #6 – feedback crit

For today’s crit, I tried out different kinds of grids (the form of the notebook seems good as it is for now) and a folder for the third part instead of another booklet.

I quickly realised that just outlines of different parts make these grids too complicated. So next to looking at colour and stroke lines for the grids I also will have to chose elements from it.
Comments: maybe use windows/a specific century /style of building, be carefull with widths of the line.

For the folder/ampersand, I decided to just somehow put the ampersand onto the folder and have it stand out behind the two other booklets.

I also looked at a selection of ampersands.

For next week, we should present a finished pre-production prototype ready to be produced for the Pop Up Shop at the London Graphic Centre in Covent Garden at the end of May (for which we are also currently struggling with the identity).

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